treasure box

the menu card was reflecting the light on her pretty face

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/mouton/50739130/">edited version</a>
treasure box

treasure box

the menu card was reflecting the light on her pretty face <a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/mouton/50739130/">edited version</a>
mots clés : cute paulette lumiere prise de vue : 10 juin 2006 à 13h17publication : 11 juin 2006 à 03h49apn / lens : Canon EOS 20D / Tokina 12-24 f4exif : 1/2000s. f/4 24mm ISO200 -1/3EV


 

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Tres chouette photo
posté par xnxbox, 11/06/2006
#1 (from the <a href="http://www.flickr.com/groups/want5/"><b>IWANT5!</b></a> group)

i like the texture of the skin and the light reflection which you have captured. i donno whether to go with your manupulation of the tones, coz i feel there's too much red in it.
nice crop n nice capture...
posté par ButterStones, 03/08/2006
Great lighting, and her ear-rings are awesome!

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posté par Lady Vervaine, 03/08/2006
The light is great and she is undoubtedly very pretty. The background adds great atmosphere. I think I would have preferred to have the whole of her head in the picture, rather than cut the top off

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posté par Cath B almost gone, 03/08/2006
#4 (from the <a href="http://www.flickr.com/groups/want5/">IWANT5!</a> group)

I don't mind cropping her head off... it draws the focus to her face. The reddish tone does seem a little much, but then again, she could just be sunburned (in other words, it isn't over done). Pretty girl and nicely done.
posté par Bucket2005, 04/08/2006
#5 from the <a href="http://www.flickr.com/groups/want5/"><b>IWANT5!</b></a> group)

Often, usually in fact, reflected lignt is your best friend. This is an example of "not always". Reflected light can be harsh if the reflector is harsh. I would not show her this photograph. It is a wonderful portrait minus the light. Her countanence is intriquing. Thank you.
posté par Glen's Pics, 06/08/2006
Yea, too bad about the light.

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posté par Doxieone, 08/08/2006
i don't like the light, sorry. i think it's a beautiful portrait however.

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posté par Artwerk, 08/08/2006
as a portrait it's unusual and interesting. however the people in the background grinding on their pie brings it out of the realm of portrait.
Unfortunately her hair is placed so that you'll never be able to burn the other figures out.

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posté par Donny O'Smokem, 08/08/2006
I think you probably could try to burn the background out and do a decent job to get rid of the distraction. It's worth trying. The face lighting is great, but yes, background unfortunately takes away from a save.

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posté par firechick, 08/08/2006
Less dof to blur those people in the background would have helped a lot.

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posté par Sighthound, 08/08/2006
Less DOF, and I love to see eyes....

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posté par liber, 08/08/2006
I like the light on her face, but I'm having trouble with those people in the background, too.

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posté par moominmolly, 08/08/2006
yeah, the portrait is missing something b/c her eyes are gazing downward.

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posté par foto amazonas, 08/08/2006
Great picture of a forehead.

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posté par Indiana Horst, 08/08/2006
too shy.

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posté par xdrei [??], 08/08/2006
i think you should recrop
(note)
posté par Domk, 08/08/2006
thx for the suggestion, will work on it when I got some times :)
posté par mouton.rebelle, 09/08/2006